Rough Draft
This was the original draft that I showed during my consultations and to my client before making any major changes.
Feedback
After my consultation with my professor, she had a lot of little suggestions especially for the cover. I was suggested to remove the border of the logo so that the white is not showing. I was also suggested to adjust the spacing around the boxes so that the text is not as close as it is now. She also recommended that I remove the underlining under the titles and try to change up the format of the sponsor line. Along with that, the spacing on the middle section is off, as there are some parts that are closer than others. She also said that it would pop more if the boxes were a light shade of gold and did not have the black borders. My professor also said to make the name of the school smaller than the title of the pamphlet.
Feedback (continued)
For the back, everyone essentially said the same thing about the spacing next to the boxes edge and the underlining. Another suggestion was to put parenthesis around the room numbers for overall cleanliness. My mom really enjoyed this draft and only said something about the spacing. She really liked the gold arrows, "get involved" part, and the front cover. I took all of this into account for the final draft as there was a lot of great feedback from everyone who reviewed it.
